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Sock
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Someone decked James in the face.
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His lip broke. He tasted punch.
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He liked it. Put a sock over his
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right hand, attached a few tacks,
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sharp ends protruding, cutting the air.
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People asked what it was for.
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He demonstrated.
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Gave himself a good personal assault.
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Did this when he hated himself,
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or for the fun of it.
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He also didn't mind when a
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friend took a swing at his jaw, or flesh.
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He'd look in the mirror and see recent
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blood holes on his cheeks, and some scabs.
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Bruised skin around the eyes.
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Forehead scratched, skinned nose.
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He'd smile at his work,
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laugh at his chipped teeth and soul.
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This masochism thrilled him.
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It wasn't a chasm.
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He liked his fist under spasm.
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Some people in white coats
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came to him. He splashed some red on them.
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They splashed a tranquilizer.
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Took off his shoes in a barren room,
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strapped him down.
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They told him he had to stop before he
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committed suicide.
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He told them they just needed to let him keep
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hurting himself. He didn't see what
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was so wrong with
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it, when the norm was
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people suffocating their knuckles with hatred.
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2 Mar 09

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first poem i've read on masochism!
cool, fun to read :)
 — faith

thanks for reading, Faith. i appreciate it.
 — listen

This is excellent. Best I've read this week.

Larry extensively red Lark
 — larrylark

thanks Larry. good to see you.
 — listen

Listen, I like the consistency of your work, the human aspect of it that is--this is no exception.
 — PaulS

sad but very original.
 — Anachocolata

thanks Paul. glad you came by.

it is sad, Anachocolata. but i hope it was still enjoyable.

thanks.
 — listen

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