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Yeahoo People
OKcomputer

Nelsy got a throat choke
 1
coke throat
 2
from a soap cigarette, french flask
 3
where teeth clink.
 4
Nelsy got a red neck
 5
paint spraying, Saints four
 6
piss heroin the bleed go
 7
make artists on the floor
 8
Nelsy got a skull cap
 9
pulled back, piano brain
 10
middle c gits th tail bone
 11
the wrong song she go insane
 12
 
 
Yhuyook, flesh blue
 13
hanging
 14
on a skin balloon
 15
stuffed with nicotine
 16
lung butter green
 17
yellow teeth cling
 18
rockets launch around the gut
 19
fingernails rupture and drip white delite
 20
eyeballs in bowties
 21
suck on stale flies
 22
sunrise Yhuyook! come to be baptized
 23
 
 
Mitmot atop mechanical loins
 24
services dykepals with cement cock
 25
on bread sheet beds
 26
black mold, bends in
 27
on top hovers Mitmot
 28
once had been holy
 29
now abandoned
 30
penetrates his jealousy
 31
squirts blood clots
 32
infecting the she-bean
 33
through the cracked tits
 34

19 Mar 09

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yeahoo would be better in a high school musical (!)
 — unknown

"Poetry is like a hand print of the invisible, a footprint of visible reality, following it like a shadow" L.Ferlinghetti... who else... j.g.smiles...
 — goeszon

your words are like beads of sweat slowly trickling their way down, down, down towards my cock.

you make me hot. wicked.
 — DeformedLion

Rich, Dense and Fluid. Great work.
 — unknown

you make me hot.
 — OKcomputer

your words they make love to each other and pop beautiful bastard children
 — repeatme

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