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Memories
faith

The story's been told
 1
The fight's been fought
 2
I've got to accept
 3
The things that I've got
 4
 
 
Two years have passed
 5
I've come so far
 6
Driven down life's road
 7
In a broken-down car
 8
 
 
But the car, I’ve fixed
 9
The road, I’ve paved
 10
The experiences I had
 11
Will always be saved
 12
 
 
The scars have faded
 13
The band-aids are clear
 14
My arms hold a sign reading:
 15
“Nothing was here”
 16
 
 
Back in the day
 17
I was tired of trying
 18
I wasn’t okay
 19
And I wasn’t crying
 20
 
 
Two years later
 21
She’s moved on
 22
It’s a horrible fact
 23
But it’ll make us all strong
 24
 
 
So we’ll take our lives
 25
One step every day
 26
I’ll live like a fighter
 27
So the memories will stay
 28
 
 
Present day Friday
 29
I’m sat at a desk
 30
Typing my heart out
 31
To remember what’s best.
 32
 
 
And so, today,
 33
To tribute her fight
 34
My poem will affirm
 35
My future, my life.
 36

25 Mar 09

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bravo!!!

encore perhaps?

thank you
 — unknown

Man that was a lot of work... you could have saved yourself and made two pieces by making four stanzas big words for paragraphs like you could leave one out and use four each time for separate pieces or poems... i hope you get my ideas... then be sure to read it close and keep on writing... j.g. smiles
 — goeszon

HOLY MOLY THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
 — SammzBernii

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