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Johnny Loves Jo (Briefly)

Golden graffiti composed upon brick,
each letter linked by the first ray of sun.
Creatures of night put love in this place,
brush head and turpentine sees that its gone.

26 Mar 09

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this would work even better as a haiku?

you could show more rather than tell (the parentheticals removed and the last line implied type of thing)

lovely . . . ephemeral . . .

thank you
 — unknown

yes, love is ever so. there but then, as if every now only exists to be driven over by a prostitutes blood-soaked heel...mean bitch this thing we call life.

and thus ends the lesson.

kind of good poem.
 — DeformedLion

I love lovely ephemera and i see it in the mirror every morning

Larry self regarding Lark
 — larrylark

Dear DL

I take it the way it is and try to see the best that each person is

Larry holy Joe Lark
 — larrylark