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should do
hank

tell a stranger
 1
i love you
 2
tell a loved one
 3
thank you
 4

29 Mar 09

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All you zen brothers of poetry, have a nice day.... fellowships of minds are required here an only a few are allowed to enter, there will be a cover charge... this is upside down and fun cause it might get you teeth knocked out ... good deal ... dealer...j.g.smiles
 — goeszon

jg. thanks. would be lying if i said i wasn't expecting that.
 — hank

tell a stranger
i love you
tell a loved one
you're strange
 — AlchemiA

nice capsule, hank ;)

nice fiddling with it Alch...
 — Gynoid

I mentioned to the cashier at Tesco, portly black woman, "Hank loves me", she responded with a blank stare, took my money, and said "Thank you."
 — unknown

nice poem
 — chuckle_s

changed the title.
 — hank

nice... I thought you were dead.
how goes it?? ~forbster
 — aforbing

fuck..
 — gnormal

cufk?
tish?
sips?

that
should
do.

: )
 — fractalcore

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