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the recession, 2nd episode: Living in the Desert
bykguy2000

its getting late
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two women walk by
 2
i chew on my doughnut
 3
i offer boris alcohol but he doesnt care
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i tell boris he makes me feel lucky
 5
the only thing that can hurt me is girls
 6
in music videos
 7
in commercials
 8
in bars and on the street
 9
 
 
one woman walks by in heels
 10
i post a sign
 11
 
 
DO NOT BREAK BOTTLES
 12
Dogs have been cutting their feet on the broken glass
 13
 
 
i get boris to laugh
 14
we do coke off a meteor and feel alone
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23 May 09

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excellent poem
 — rivergood

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