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The Spectacle
lexare24

Treading on the shores of a shameless sea of red,
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she dips her toes into the water.
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Warm rippled velvet licks her slowly,
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inviting the soft folds of her feet to carry her into its depths.
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With no immediate fear of drowning
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she plunges her body forward as her eyes roll back.
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Supple ripples embrace her with fleeting passion
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as she finds comfort in the salt of her wounds.
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Showing a smile on her face
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that streches like the ocean around her,
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she proudly breaks the water
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as we stand and laugh at her naked body.
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2 Jun 09


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