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you finish
hank

so apparently you win
 1
you lose but you have to look
 2
a very small pond waiting for
 3
a frog found a frog or the frog
 4
found it, trees gather rain
 5
 
 
so apparently you win
 6
you lose but you have to wait
 7
able to scratch away surface
 8
suffice to bleed and blend
 9
and see,
 10

19 Jul 09


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not bad. your sculptures are outstanding though. a cousin of mine works with steel and they are no way as good as yours. you are very talented. not this poem though ;-)
 — raskolniikov

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