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dreams that fall between the lines
vida

I don’t see where it begins
 1
but this ending seem bitter (without you)
 2
and it’s me alone at the rainbows
 3
colors sparkle something real
 4
 
 
bended through shadows of birds flying
 5
…figures you left figures me dying,
 6
patience stretches out and dries on the floor,
 7
wasted now why love me for
 8
 
 
look at the ceiling between us
 9
as far as some stars are
 10
connecting celestial dots but not us,
 11
yet we walk along the same bar
 12
 
 
bended through shadows of birds flying
 13
…figures you love figures me lying,
 14
patience stretches out and lies on the floor,
 15
wasted now why love me for
 16
 
 
can I wake up, this dream is old
 17
and bitter truth could be sweeter if told,
 18
a thousand light bulbs are very clever
 19
but I see better in dark weather
 20
 
 
bended through shadows of birds flying
 21
…figures i love figures I'm dying,
 22

21 Aug 09


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