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Detached
neimade

I hold my heart in my hands
 1
Gushing red, warm, still beating
 2
Barely
 3
Enough to tie me to land
 4
It pumps polluted fleeting
 5
Life
 6
Would have less meaning than sand
 7
If hearts and minds weren't meeting
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18 Oct 09

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