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what puts you to bed
deserves your respect and what keeps you awake
your wrath
so soon to fade?
that a lance, a club
becomes a pillow

15 Nov 09

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Succinct aphorism--nicely done.
 — sybarite

deserves, not deserve.  Where's the rest of the poem?
 — Isabelle5

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