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sleep
hank

what puts you to bed
 1
deserves your respect and what keeps you awake
 2
your wrath
 3
 
 
so soon to fade?
 4
that a lance, a club
 5
becomes a pillow
 6

15 Nov 09


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Succinct aphorism--nicely done.
 — sybarite

deserves, not deserve.  Where's the rest of the poem?
 — Isabelle5

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