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big boat
hank

big bloat
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dubai is not suffering from a lack of money
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it is suffering from a lack of interest
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it's old hat this day new one next
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populaces' want quick turned to
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a big float kid like focus span
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dubai is already rich boring
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those it sought to attract
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29 Nov 09

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nice poem
it is a bit wordy

i suppose it just playing on the people that bought off plan.
 — unknown

Glad im not there
 — Empty

jeepers, do you know the one about the two lesbians? this is topical comedy and has to stand and fall with the daily interest too, and yet the ending just dumps it, just turns into something which must sound like some clerk in a bank moaning about how unfair the world is to the magical investor.
 — bmikebauer

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