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big boat

big bloat
dubai is not suffering from a lack of money
it is suffering from a lack of interest
it's old hat this day new one next
populaces' want quick turned to
a big float kid like focus span
dubai is already rich boring
those it sought to attract

29 Nov 09

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nice poem
it is a bit wordy

i suppose it just playing on the people that bought off plan.
 — unknown

Glad im not there
 — Empty

jeepers, do you know the one about the two lesbians? this is topical comedy and has to stand and fall with the daily interest too, and yet the ending just dumps it, just turns into something which must sound like some clerk in a bank moaning about how unfair the world is to the magical investor.
 — bmikebauer