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magnetism reversed
thorough

lost the second person, then
 1
was destroyed by the third
 2
 
 
my generation's generalizations
 3
turn my facts to mindfucks
 4
 
 
particles move faster
 5
on the path between
 6
my better half and i
 7
 
 
so much energy wasted,
 8
our kinetic existence
 9
burst out between us
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i am a reflection of myself --
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flung into space
 12
every time we get too close
 13

8 Dec 09

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