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Parting ways
CrudeEcstasy

We breathe a light
 1
that dark cities
 2
can't get to
 3
Bathe in rivers sweet
 4
with moonshine.
 5
 
 
O sweet sister
 6
of mine
 7
 
 
Wandering leads to
 8
dusty trails and
 9
ever changing signs.
 10
Clearer minds.
 11
 
 
There is no trepidation
 12
in this sad long trumpet
 13
note.
 14
Raw chords echo like
 15
barrels hold the sound.
 16
Vibrations break fresh
 17
ground
 18
and we all roll on to the next
 19
punchline.
 20
 
 
Hold mine and I'll cradle yours.
 21
Write and read letters through fire.
 22
We share a limitless desire
 23
for the new garden,
 24
and the tide is coming in.
 25
 
 
Bless our trails and trials,
 26
feed us off the broth of
 27
intuition and leave sleeping
 28
dogs to howl at their
 29
moons.
 30

9 Dec 09


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this is a good write, i love lines 12-20. well done :)
 — sweetmisery

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