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piecing
hank

know that when you are right
 1
it lasts an instant
 2
 
 
do not be disturbed by being right
 3
only in a moment
 4
 
 
know that when you are wrong
 5
it can last life times
 6
 
 
strive to be right
 7

25 Jan 10


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piece, do you mean peace?
 — unknown

no, mean piecing.
 — hank

but peace. of course.
 — hank

I get "Piecing." At least I get that the narrator is piecing his or her life together by instants in rightness. But did you mean "lifetimes?" To my ears, the last line may be understood to mean stay in the moment, not just live right. Provocative.
 — NicMichaels

yes.
 — hank

yes yes yes. and no. the last line just means what it says. 'strive to be right'.
who said anything about 'living' right?.
 — hank

good nicmichal.
 — hank

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