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after visitation at work release
unknown

had her wings clipped
 1
but while i was down
 2
she got em stretched out
 3
like some
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goddammed peacock
 5
it's her coworkers
 6
all in her ear
 7
with that oprah
 8
cotton candy bullshit
 9
but daddy's home now
 10
and i got
 11
my shears.
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8 Feb 10


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HEe HEh!
 — ghost

Misogynistic blather.
 — Bloodfetish

Blather? I think not. Well wrought. Thanks for standing the hair up on the back of my neck. Tone is credible. The writer is a sheep in mysoginist's clothing. The real thing wouldn't write this acutely or poignantly of himself, unless he was in recovery.
 — NicMichaels
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