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Fascinating
OctopusWings

Slich.
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You’d be surprised too
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If you looked down to blue
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Where red was supposed to be.
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Cutting carrots for stew
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And accidently instead you
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Cut the tip of your finger off.
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A sea of red
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Is blue instead.
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Oh, God, you’re an alien.
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8 Feb 10


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What a thrill —
My thumb instead of an onion.
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of hinge

Of skin



Hard for me to read anything about a vegetable accident and not think of Plath
 — Bloodfetish
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