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carter road, bombay.
varun

sharp blue
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sea-side sky, cool breeze:
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laze, breathe; rest,
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hum, sing, sleep.
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25 Feb 10


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good poem
 — stout

i like it too. i liked those days too.
 — varun

ahh! yes carter road is nice. :)
 — trochee

humidity must be a killer right now. killer bee, stinging everyone to death-sweat. sharp sun. hmm.
 — varun

Pretty!
 — psychofemale

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