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this northern kid
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i seduced his between the rail cars
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he was dead and determined
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if the camera is still
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no matter the make
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good things happen
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i remember when you came out
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after thirty days sitting
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and could only recite forty four
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you found amazing success
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and sitting soup still
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squeezed everything out of you
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5 Mar 10


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I am at a friends house,
pulling down a wall and rebuilding a ceiling.
being paid in cash.

They made mince with bone tonight
Which was nice.
 — unknown

*sitting soup still*
I like it uh-lot.
:)
 — mandolyn

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