| Glitter and prayer
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NicMichaels
| A mother stuffs holidays | 1 |
with marshmallow chick sunshine - | 2 |
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she wants you in Easter baskets all your life | 3 |
because | 4 |
outside the same porch, | 5 |
on a different Sunday, comes | 6 |
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the neighbor's family dog. His only vice | 7 |
actual rabbits | 8 |
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un-seaming themselves | 9 |
in foil tufts. He proffers | 10 |
the soiling of real | 11 |
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grass, you bury your pets | 12 |
with a popsicle-stick cross. | 13 |
Glitter, prayer. Adult | 14 |
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curl a sermon of ribbon | 15 |
for little fingers to grab. But who can choose | 16 |
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between holidays and dogs? | 17 |
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30 Mar 10 |
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This is good. I especially like the last stanza. =]
— radiogirl
Nice contrasts to set up your message. I like how you delivered this one.
— Tandisol
This is different. I really like it
— psychofemale
Thank you radiogirl, Tandisol, psychofemale.
— NicMichaels
Intriguing poem well writ. Brings to mind "Watership Down" for some reason.
— JKWeb
=)
— mandolyn
This is a great write. You have the ability to take the simplist of life's moments and give them an edge. You have a unique and special voice, poet.
— PaulS
awestruck at the imagrey of 'curl(ing) a sermon of ribbon/for little fingers to grab'
Bravo
— PaleHorse
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