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the lady that came with the frame

the lady that came with the frame
like us is sitting sideways staring
through landscape that hangs beside
and to the door beyond

7 Apr 10

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hahaha!  It's called Instant Ancestor!  

This could be longer.  I have no idea where the action is and I'd like a picture of the landscape.  If you are also in a picture, that's very cool, but you could give us more of that, too.  That could be very interesting.
 — Isabelle5

Hank, you have a strange and slightly perplexing imagination!
 — Isabelle5

the 'burbs. right?
 — SarahMichele