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the square goes kookie
chumble

hey!
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bobby socks, saddle shoes,
 2
picnic basket plaid!
 3
poppy-blond poodle cut,
 4
eyes like lily pads!
 5
 
 
get the buckles, get the bag,
 6
and baker boy beret!
 7
get the varnish colored peach
 8
for saturday's soiree!
 9
 
 
we're feeling in a spanish mood,
 10
so bring the creme de cacao!
 11
highball spoons and cubes of ice—
 12
we'll fly to acapulco!
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what's that, dear?
 14
you volunteer
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for backseat bingo
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at the pier?
 17
 
 
daddy-o,
 18
i think you're queer—
 19
a real wet rag,
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so cool it, hear?
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—what's your tale, nightingale?
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—cut the gas, you horse's ass!
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—but i ain't no spazz, i ain't no pig!
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—you cruisin' for a bruisin', dig?
 25
 
 
hey...
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hepcats, have you heard the word?
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that odd ball boozer nabbed that bird—
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she died below the backyard deck,
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with red, red rings around her neck.
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12 Apr 10

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get the fuck out.
 — jenakajoffer

:)
 — jenakajoffer

*Mad applause*--fabulous, fast paced kooky fun!
Made me think of Dr. Hook's Freakin' at the Freaker's Ball.
Love "backseat bingo."
 — sybarite

get the fuck in
 — chumble

Is this Reid's poem?
;)
 — mandolyn

hah - this is cool, writ with drool - from an old fool who likes too
 — AlchemiA

excuse me?  reid?
why are you guys being so mean to me, i'm new :(
 — chumble

prove it, chum.  
;)
 — jenakajoffer

and how to do that, jennybrat?
(a little a skit, a little a skat?)
 — chumble

this baby's got a classy chassis, ya dig, she's really cookin'!
like crazy, like wow
 — aurelius

hey, you're with it, auri ginsberg
 — chumble

chumble, you said you were 'funnier' -- but you never did show YER funny man.
(are you a bro or a bra?)
 — mandolyn

my funny man's in meh pants, wanna see?  that shit ain't free
i'm a bra, though, my esteemed brosociate.
 — chumble

not sure how to do that, other than post another poem :)
 — jenakajoffer

Reminds me of Bare Naked Ladies songs, here and there.  Sing it, you crazy bopper!
 — Isabelle5

hmm, cumblee yummee.
: )
 — fractalcore

i mean, cHumblee.
: )
 — fractalcore

'go square' - glasvegas

great song too!

nice cool poem.
 — unknown

lol- bare naked ladies song- YEP!
 — mandolyn

This is over-the-top good, good, good!
 — PaulS

KOol poem
 — psychofemale

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