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Where The Wild Things Are
larrylark

In the wild things forest a jungle grew
 1
and a boat appeared on the shore."Cor blimey, let's go!"
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So they rowed over rivers oceans and ponds through hail and the snow,
 3
singing their songs till they came to the house of Max, the wildest of them all.
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What a roaring ball they had,
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everyone went mad but none madder than mad Max,
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who wore them out with his screaming and shouting.
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Then, like all wild beasts, they slumped down on their chairs  
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and wished to head back to their flea ridden lairs,
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where they grappled with polar bears, and had not one care in the world.
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But Max roared his terrible roar and was sick all over the floor
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and cried and cried and cried till they thought he might die.
 12
 
 
So the Wild Things stayed and they're there to this day,
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hiding in the wardrobe snoring until the dead of night
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when they leap out on Max who pretends to be frightened
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but never really is, being the bravest  most imaginative boy
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in the whole wide world, except when wishing to kiss a girl.
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13 Apr 10

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Nice poem.  I think I had the book as a kid but haven't seen the movie yet.  Maybe consider omitting 'the' from line 3 and 'in the world' from line 10.  Of course, it's your call but enjoyed reading overall.
 — JKWeb

Yes, I havent seen the movie, but read the book. really like ur poem
 — psychofemale

Thanks for the advice JK which i will consider at the next quarterly review

Larry
 — larrylark

lovely. not see the movie either. love the book though. thanks.
 — unknown

No probs. The book is brilliantly illusttrated and i look forward to how they tackle it visually in the film

Larry wild thing Lark
 — larrylark

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