|A Lover's Quarrel
Ignite the fire
We both burn out
Tears are shed
But there's a drought
We're in the open
One heart mends
The other's broken
Turn the page
Back to the start
The angel shoots
Gets hit by the dart
In the heart
The love explodes
Upon us both
Still in denial
Of the passion we shared
We're still hostile
Let's put an end
To this quarrel, this duel
Ignite the fire
I have the fuel
13 Apr 10
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Is this lyrics to one of your songs? I like it, especially "Tears are shed but there's a dought"
it does sound lyrical....i like it.
Thanks guys! I plan on making this a song in the near future :)
Much thanks again!!!
yes, these resemble lyrics, yes
Better as lyrics than poetry, this time. Poetry would not have to rhyme to make it work but as I am well aware, lyrics often demand a very stark and heavy beat throughout.
The angel shoots, gets hit by the dart is hysterical!
hehe thank you :) and you are rite, lyrics do demand that beat!! :D
i agrre w isabell funny line yes
This would never work as a song, there is too much starch in the meter and this would sound like old macdoonald's farm. with a shingy dingy here and a shingy dingy there.
bad bad bad to the bone
Anything that has
"tears are shed"
in the first stanza (or any stanza for that matter)becomes a murky, putrid swamp
I no longer wish to tread.
heeheeteehee. tread, shed. I can rhyme, too!
unfortunately, that does not = poetry.
that's why i sell a shit ton of my music :)
but i guess old macdonald did sell cuz hell everyone knows the words :)
you sell a shit ton? probably because they can't unsterstand it behind the screeching.
that made no sense...lol
what does unsterstand mean? i do not understand :O
I enjoyed this, very much.
thank ya very much! :D
are these the lyrics to a song ???
i love the first verse, kinda puts me mind mind of where I'm at with my fella at the mo :0)
yes, they are lyrics :D
you must take me for a fool. cause personally
i don't think you've got the fuel anymore.
and yes, we're probably still far too horsetile
the horsie's broken a leg, and the tiles are cracking up with laughter.
maybe change the last line to:
I had the fool
surely, you mean barf?
what in the fuck are you talking about....seriously?