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A Lover's Quarrel
psychofemale

Ignite the fire
 1
We both burn out
 2
Tears are shed
 3
But there's a drought
 4
 
 
Hiding out
 5
We're in the open
 6
One heart mends
 7
The other's broken
 8
 
 
Turn the page
 9
Back to the start
 10
The angel shoots
 11
Gets hit by the dart
 12
 
 
In the heart
 13
The love explodes
 14
Pounding out
 15
Now bestowed
 16
 
 
Upon us both
 17
Still in denial
 18
Of the passion we shared
 19
We're still hostile
 20
 
 
Let's put an end
 21
To this quarrel, this duel
 22
Ignite the fire
 23
I have the fuel
 24

13 Apr 10

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Is this lyrics to one of your songs? I like it, especially "Tears are shed but there's a dought"
 — Capulet

it does sound lyrical....i like it.
 — Tandisol

Thanks guys! I plan on making this a song in the near future :)
Much thanks again!!!
 — psychofemale

yes, these resemble lyrics, yes
 — unknown

;)
 — psychofemale

Better as lyrics than poetry, this time.  Poetry would not have to rhyme to make it work but as I am well aware, lyrics often demand a very stark and heavy beat throughout.  

The angel shoots, gets hit by the dart is hysterical!  
 — Isabelle5

hehe thank you :)  and you are rite, lyrics do demand that beat!! :D
 — psychofemale

i agrre w isabell funny line yes
 — unknown

:)
 — psychofemale

This would never work as a song, there is too much starch in the meter and this would sound like old macdoonald's farm. with a shingy dingy here and a shingy dingy there.
 — unknown

bad bad bad to the bone
 — unknown

Anything that has
"tears are shed"
in the first stanza (or any stanza for that matter)becomes a murky, putrid swamp
I no longer wish to tread.

heeheeteehee. tread, shed. I can rhyme, too!

unfortunately, that does not = poetry.

=)
 — unknown

that's why i sell a shit ton of my music :)
 — psychofemale

but i guess old macdonald did sell cuz hell everyone knows the words :)
 — psychofemale

you sell a shit ton? probably because they can't unsterstand it behind the screeching.
 — unknown

that made no sense...lol
 — psychofemale

what does unsterstand mean? i do not understand :O
 — psychofemale

I enjoyed this, very much.
 — Seanote

thank ya very much! :D
 — psychofemale

are these the lyrics to a song ???
i love  the first verse, kinda puts me mind mind of where I'm at with my fella at the mo :0)
 — wintersun

yes, they are lyrics :D
 — psychofemale

you must take me for a fool. cause personally
i don't think you've got the fuel anymore.

and yes, we're probably still far too horsetile
the horsie's broken a leg, and the tiles are cracking up with laughter.

maybe change the last line to:

I had the fool
 — unknown

baff?
 — unknown

surely, you mean barf?
 — unknown

what in the fuck are you talking about....seriously?
 — psychofemale

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