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A Harsh Ending for the Life of the Top Twenty-Five Playlist
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Once residing in the most curious non-extant iPod of all time.

When I was fifteen,
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I tried to tell you.
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The story of the Top Twenty-Five
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Playlist. A strange sort of person,
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liked to talk to songs. The songs liked
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Playlist as well, as to be friends
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with Playlist was an amazing honor.
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All they had to do was be played the most.
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Simple—but the songs didn't find it this way.
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The songs, while singeing with their desire to
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be given the most attention,
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began to fall into corruption.
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Scandal jagged the iPod.
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The songs just wanted to be played,
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as they got fame from their listener,
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and from Playlist.
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But when the listener became angry,
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because he wanted many of his songs to not
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go so unnoticed,
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he kicked out Playlist.
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Straight to the Recycle Bin,
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where he would not be recycled.
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But I never would have been there
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to stop this madness
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and save Playlist.
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Because you never gave me
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a chance—never let me have
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an iPod and learn this lesson.
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19 Apr 10

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Interesting one...
 — psychofemale

It would have worked better if it wasn't so broken up. I like it, but it could use some serious improvement with the flow. Keep it up!
 — irisiis

nice.

"you cheated!"
 — listen

now we're talking.

(it's not the cool fire it used to be ...)

()JOKER!)+!!!!!!!!
 — listen

This reads more like a confused explanation than a poem
 — larrylark

unique!
 — trochee

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