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vex money
hank

coins from pocket into next
 1
change of plans and pants
 2
decrease wants not to be vext
 3
musical pounds and pence
 4
 
 
we harbor within ourselves
 5
banks and banks, primitive gold
 6
and our jingling jangling cells
 7
unfold and fold and fold
 8
 
 
so all the change to come our way
 9
spend thrift liquid water
 10
in advance we learn to play
 11
pay never impressed my father
 12

for Hank

4 May 10

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i like this, like the dancing of a coin on a magician's hand and the nick cave jingle jangling jack.
 — Ananke

love it!
 — psychofemale

figures.
 — hank

lk
 — hank

I like the title - presumable vex means hate - I don't know what the poem is about - I like the last line - money never impressed my father either
 — Julespc

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