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Handkerchief And Helix Erasure
larrylark

Large girl, eleven,
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built like a fifteen year old,
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hardest on the yard.
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The fear is palpable.
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a contagion of confused thinking
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spreads across each page like a storm
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that will only blow itself out
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on the other side of the classroom door.  
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All year she has been propped up,
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walked blindfolded through sums and sentences.
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Here she is floored, on her own,
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and her own is hardly anything at all.
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One Helix eraser held in the palm of my hand
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is all I can offer, and a handkerchief
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as her tears start to flow.
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The dreaded SATS exam week has just passed in schools

19 May 10


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Comments:

nicely captured emotion......
 — Tandisol

I agree!
 — psychofemale

Thanks Tandisel. I wish i could capture emotion instead of pretending...sigh.....
 — larrylark

Thanks psychofemale
 — larrylark

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