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Vengeance
psychofemale

No need for vengeance
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We've turned to peace
 2
We've quit throwing stones
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To feed our disease
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Civil and focused
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No need to cower
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No need to hate
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There's too much desire
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When our eyes meet
 9
The connection's unbreakable
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Could get us in trouble
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If we're not careful
 12
 
 
I wish I could hate you
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But that's not the case
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I wish I could love you
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But that thought's a waste
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26 May 10

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song like
 — unknown

bong like
 — unknown

like it
 — silentspring

thanks
 — psychofemale

it is lyrical.  i enjoyed it
 — Tandisol

thank you :) i made this into a song last night....funny you say that haha
 — psychofemale

any other suggestions?
 — psychofemale

makes a good song- indeed.
 — mandolyn

thank you :D
 — psychofemale

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