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Curious Unrelated Incidents at The Dog Inn
larrylark

The ordinary image of sepia tinted parents
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stood warily while photographed outside "The Dog Inn"
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nineteen forty something
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brought back a later time there,
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of our meal half eaten,
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me leaving, adrift.
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You brought so many gifts  to my door
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but sifting through love at the wrong time,
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in the wrong place, is as hopeless as tears
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that shift butterfly days  back into the past.
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30 May 10


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i liked the ending to this
 — psychofemale

thanks for your time and trouble pf

Larry troubled times Lark
 — larrylark

this has been done. and better. curious incidentals in the night.
 — unknown

Your probably write unknown but who knows, like i always put my name up while others don't, and thats been done and better to, incidentally

Larryout in the unknown Lark
 — larrylark

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