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Manslaughter (to the heart)
psychofemale

You really made
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a mess this time.
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You've destroyed my heart!
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It won't beat
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on time!
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It gets off the click,
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like there's no metronome.
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Accelerate.
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Hit the break.
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We'll never get back home.
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Jump the gun,
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slow back down,
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tortoise and hare,
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go their rounds.
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Combat-ready
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Ready to roll
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Conflict
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Struggle
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No cruise control
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We call it manslaughter.
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That's the fact.
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You made a mess,
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with your heart's impact.
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31 May 10

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Metal Girl: Make it ring like you've been struck.
Sing this. I'll buy the CD.
 — Bloodfetish

Why thank you :) I am making this a song as we speak!
 — psychofemale

anyone else?
 — psychofemale

it's alright.
 — unknown

thanks
 — psychofemale

hello
 — psychofemale

sry i was testing something everytime id type it would go blank
 — psychofemale

sure...
 — unknown

um ok....
 — psychofemale

lyrics as poetry. pure form, and excellent.
 — unknown

thank you :)
 — psychofemale

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