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toast
hank

when we were young we fought
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the world was new and it was fun
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we fought because it was fun
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we are older now and do not fight
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the fighting is over us grown
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adults shake hands and pat backs
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1 Jun 10

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:) so true
 — psychofemale

what?
 — hank

there's nothing true about this.
 — hank

when we are old we fidget, and when we did-it, we didn't know, but did it. and, when we were young we were strung out and losers, pretending to be boozers, but then we graduated.
 — bmikebauer

I have a very very different poem called toast on here! nice though, I like.
 — Sea-Air-A

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