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In the Field Beyond My House
psychofemale

Two ways back home
 1
I'll take the long one
 2
The one that reminds me
 3
where I'm from
 4
 
 
The nights in the field
 5
searching for spirits
 6
In the land of stone
 7
beyond the ditch
 8
 
 
Where I almost lost
 9
my life one time
 10
Racing to win
 11
it hurts to rewind
 12
 
 
The past can take you
 13
to places forgotten
 14
Like the field beyond
 15
my house and garden
 16
 
 
Blowing up lovers
 17
in beautiful fireworks
 18
To hurt who hurt us
 19
to feel some worth
 20
 
 
A sweet revenge
 21
A personal release
 22
In the field I grow
 23
and I still dream
 24

2 Jun 10

Rated 9 (9) by 2 users.
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I like it, but I like the ending the most. L 21-24 A+ .
 — Seanote

thank you :) ..tis a true poem
 — psychofemale

I enjoyed the poem, especially the 2nd verse, it has something of the mystical about it.
 — UHamilton

i love lines 17 and 18. nice one, psychf..
 — majan

very nice. thanks.
 — unknown

thanks guys that really means a lot :)
 — psychofemale

More like a poem than a song this time. Nice one.
 — JKWeb

Why thank you :) means much!!
 — psychofemale

well done like steak
 — unknown

LOL thanks  
 — psychofemale

i love and adore all of your musical writing. lyrical sonics that come from the heart.
 — unknown

awh thanks so much!!
 — psychofemale

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