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groundings
hank

what i like about those stones?
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they make the same sound
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that my grandfather did at 4am
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walking around outside the tent
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camped on a platform surrounded by pebbles
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or a mesa circled by strewn monoliths
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the sound of those crunching careful steps
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like dreams disappear when you fully wake up
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9 Jun 10


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:) i love this! beautiful
 — psychofemale

thank you psycho.
that sounds fucked up to say.
'thank you psycho'. hm.
 — hank

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