the sentiment is real and the last lines give us an 'oh' of surprise which is a good move... however, the repetition of 'real' in the body of the Poement takes all the glory from the sentimental-realism of lines 30 on ...
often the story-teller or Poet is like a magician doing a magic show -- he does his second best trick first, befuddles with some not-bad moves 'til the end where he marvels us with his best-trick of pulling the rabbit out of Alice's bonnet -- however, some poets scintillate their sounds with frequencies that eMerge in your inner-ear where they divine as music in the brain to create a world of synergy, pattern-recognition all over again -- yes, and by this alchemy-of-word, the brain-detects changes that become signals which glow sympathetically as warmth in the chest or a chill in the bone, rising again as moan -- as above, so in you, the sky, the Moon and blinking stars too -- so the magic is really that we're all connected by sounds that become music in our head which stimulates memories of smell, sight making a frisson to glissando up yer' spine, oh, awe, and that's a Poetry so fine...
so this has a Poetic-feel and there is a wisdom in it that's so very very real ... write-on Grrl ;)
excellent, your poetic range is improving, and you are creating yourself outside of pure musical lyricism and into pure poetry.
keep writing, you have things to say.
wow :) thanks guys.