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snakeu
psychofemale

hair like Medusa
 1
all the snakes with their long tongues
 2
they are just split ends
 3
 
 
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6 Jul 10

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i like it
 — NicMichaels

thanks :)
 — psychofemale

Wonderful!
 — PaleHorse

thank you !
 — psychofemale

anyone else
 — psychofemale

Nice 3 liner cleverly writ.   Would like to see line 2 as something like:
'weave of snakes with darting tongues'
Otherwise, good one.
Cool title too!
 — JKWeb

thanks :) i like your line
 — psychofemale

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