| here's to you future
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psychofemale
| raise the chalice | 1 |
toast to the one | 2 |
who left you | 3 |
marooned | 4 |
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where skeletons rest | 5 |
and ships have wrecked | 6 |
where the remnant rum | 7 |
tastes stronger | 8 |
than ever | 9 |
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the jug | 10 |
half full | 11 |
but more potent | 12 |
than it could ever | 13 |
have been | 14 |
when | 15 |
it was | 16 |
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crisp | 17 |
in the sun | 18 |
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now washed onto the island | 19 |
with everything else | 20 |
long forgotten | 21 |
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including me | 22 |
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I hope your vessel crashes | 23 |
and a shark | 24 |
eats your intestines | 25 |
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and you wash up one day | 26 |
only bones | 27 |
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here's to your future......drink |
21 Jul 10 |
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*applauds.
Cheers! ♥
— mandolyn
wow psycho, didn't know this was yours. this is your best it. really.
— mandolyn
^ omit 'it' in my previous statement.
— mandolyn
Cool poem. Maybe omit 'way' from line 11 ? Also, better without lines 24-25 ? Otherwise, melikes. I'll toast to that...
— JKWeb
wow guys thank you so much :D
— psychofemale
Your favorite band sucks
— Quen
um?
— psychofemale
wtf are you talking about?
— psychofemale
anyone else?
— psychofemale
don't mind quen, he's a butt nugget. sincerely -mandee
:)
— unknown
slade?
— bmikebauer
whoa!
; )
— fractalcore
thanks guys :)
— psychofemale
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