| anatomy of an epiphany
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AlchemiA
| it began with | 1 |
a smell, your scent | 2 |
infused in the texture of my life, | 3 |
then a picture of you in | 4 |
better days | 5 |
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I sipped the fandango of your juicy roundelays | 6 |
your pregnant expectations | 7 |
in memory you gave me sons ... | 8 |
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all fullness leaks | 9 |
all expectations rebind | 10 |
to realities eventual penetrations | 11 |
every fatal thought, slipped from thinking | 12 |
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el espiritu de la salsa | 13 |
along with the gecko | 14 |
puts on its dancing shoes | 15 |
flashes fire at its tongue | 16 |
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this is it! | 17 |
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21 Jul 10 |
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hello, i love this poem. favourite line is 8 - but the entire thing is nice :-)
— PollyReg
Alc? this is a different voice for you. Not bad!
— unknown
this is it!
very good. like totally.
— DeformedLion
Nice poem. Very rich, especially line 6. * espiritu ? Think you missed the 'i' .
— JKWeb
thanks PollyReg --
unK - yeah these voices eh...
thanks DF and I added the exclamation as indicated...
JKWeb you're write I added the i ...
— AlchemiA
...doesn't need the exclamation. but you can leave it if you want.
— DeformedLion
Love this one, Alch!
-tandisol
— unknown
you dug deep to pull this one out, excellent
— psychofemale
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