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A Lost Link
MarcusLane

A proud man,
 1
Upright and unshakable
 2
In belief and morals,
 3
Once only was he seen
 4
Without his tie.
 5
 
 
A child of Edwardian England,
 6
The links of his watch chain
 7
Glinted
 8
As they hung
 9
With formality and elegance
 10
From his waistcoat pocket,
 11
Yes even as he worked.
 12
 
 
And work he did.
 13
Patiently,
 14
Brilliantly and tirelessly
 15
With ingenuity and imagination.
 16
A craftsman from a bygone age.
 17
True master of his tools.
 18
 
 
Grandfathers are soft,
 19
Playful, bear-like in their
 20
Gruff-whiskered familiarity.
 21
 
 
Not Poppy.
 22
Unknowingly aloof from his grandchildren,
 23
We avoided the need for directly addressing him,
 24
Unsure of where we stood.
 25
He’d probably have secretly
 26
Loved the informality
 27
Of our secret nickname.
 28
I hope he knew.
 29
 
 
The chapel piano did for him.
 30
Too much weight for his work-weary ticker.
 31
 
 
Grandma gave me his pocket watch to keep,
 32
And for a time I treasured it,
 33
Feeling its weight
 34
Like a smooth round pebble
 35
In my palm.
 36
A workman’s watch;
 37
Practical.
 38
A yellowing face
 39
Behind a scratched
 40
And hazy glass.
 41
But accurate,
 42
And precise.
 43
Reliable as the man.
 44
 
 
Detached in life,
 45
I liked to hope that
 46
Gazing down,
 47
Watching,
 48
He just might have
 49
Laughed
 50
In loving acknowledgement of his
 51
Grandson’s curiosity
 52
And foolishness
 53
Sitting cross-legged on the carpet,
 54
With heart-thumping nausea
 55
 
 
Adrift in a sea of springs.
 56

31 Jul 10

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