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Rumors
psychofemale

the lime becomes
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tainted
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as it sinks to the bottom
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of the glass
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clear as the tequila
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inside me
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the spoon stirs up
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a tornado
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making the taste
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not as strong
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while the funnel mixes up
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a delicacy
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the taste is like
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heaven fire
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fire heaven
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in your mouth
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the hearsay's tequila
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makes your clothes come off
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but that will depend
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on the choices made
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hopefully the rumors are true
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and I'll become tainted
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like the lime
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9 Aug 10

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better not eat the worm
 — unknown

:)
 — psychofemale

anyone else?
 — psychofemale

Tainted with intoxicating passion.
 — UHamilton

:) thanks
 — psychofemale

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