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No Other Way
larrylark

My constellation’s in a spin,
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just as helpless you are bound
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by the shackles of this world.
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Chained up to the pounding pence,
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and dense connected human cares
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dictating you go here and there
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but get such thin return.
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Now you walk with bending back,
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between the rooms where we have sat,
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among the places we have been
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and call this life your history,
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but tide and time have passed you by
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lost among the hue and cry.
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Roses in the garden wilt,
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The bushes creak, shed you built,
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will barely see you out.
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While family grew as families grow
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and family thinks it knows the road
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to see each through the threatening days,
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illusions shout inside a maze.
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Uncle Joe and Auntie Rose
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and all those others no one knows
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in faded albums never shown,
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appear and wander in our dreams,
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abandoned by their feckless schemes,
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of wealth and health and happy days,
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staring from beyond the grave.
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For if they had their time again,
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they’d still do what they never meant,
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go through life as accident,
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find no other way.
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24 Sep 10


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Flowing with insight, inviting the reader to read again,...and happy to have stumbled upon this through the cyberspace maze.

hope all are well

Pip :0)
 — unknown

Hi Pip

Long time no speak. These random cyber space collision are a maze ing. Yes we are all brilliantly well

Larry shallow and grave Lark
 — larrylark

Pip hopped ship and now he's whipped.

;)
 — mandolyn

Really mandolyn!!!!!...how utterly utterly faskinatin'
 — larrylark

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