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Ash Poem
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I am Holding this –
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tiny blue flame for you.
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    Little mounds of ash
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collecting in the lines that would determine my disintegration.
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I dream as if you will remember the symbols I keep watch for
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and sift through my days with me:
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My little ones biting into tulip stems and imitating a tango.
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My mother raking rocks from the garden in our oven.
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You, expanding like a sponge in my heart.
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We lose things if we pretend:
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    sewing needles disappear
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    into the bellies of stuffed bears
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    and we find them three years later in an embrace
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- you will never be my pincushion.
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Lately we course and counter like a split river vein.
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I’ve learned to fold (my hands) in front of you
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    and they balance like boulders above a canyon.
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      so that you may continue and etch
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       Through immovable cores.
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2 Nov 10

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my stars and garters!
if i could fave this twice, i would.
and rate it 10x10.

so many wonderful lines, and it all moves together, like a symphony.
love LOVE it.
 — mandolyn

sublime.

; )
 — fractalcore

it is, isn't it frac?
fave it frac!

do it.
now.

;)
 — mandolyn

makes me wonder when i'll learn
to write like this.

; )
 — fractalcore

if only i could fave this over and over again.

; )
 — fractalcore

yes. this author woke up more brilliant this morning than they did yesterday, i betcha. i betchu bawtum dawlur.
 — mandolyn

Thanks :)
 — unknown

just so you know, you inspired me to write a new poem
ash, it's popular today.
 — mandolyn

i dunno, but it seems like i'd read this
elsewhere long before the unk posted
this here.

it's strange... beautifully strange.

: )
 — fractalcore

Same here Frac.
I am feeling de ja vu with this poem.
I think it was posted before.

And I believe I have fav'd this before too.
 — mandolyn

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