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Black On White
larrylark

Snow covered the churchyard as they laid him
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in his final place. Smoke from a compost fire
 2
went straight up, forming charcoal colours.
 3
White flakes turned grey.
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Through breaking light I heard someone say,
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“He traded with small machinery firms.”
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A chapter read from his life, nothing learned,
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the remainder a closed book.
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Later, at the wake in his suburban house
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flames reflected in the black leaded hearth.
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Insubstantial shadows crowded
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the living room’s matt painted walls.
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Outside, sleet dissolved onto wood ash,
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Snow formed dark viscous pools.
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Soon to be no longer mourners headed home,
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loosening ties, removing hats.
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Ghosts and ghouls drift,
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white shifts to black and back
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in a grey world, curling like bonfire smoke
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vanished as the last stars faded in a clearing sky.
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2 Nov 10

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one can say, "see ya in hell"
 — unknown

To everything there is a season...a time to be born and a time to die.
 — pasnitro

Hey larrylark! You're still around. :)
l15 is my fav
Love the continuing theme of fire throughout. I just lost someone and this really hits home. Nice work.
 — amy

MORE ASH!

ok i feel like i'm taking crazy pills today.
no really...
anyone else on this boat??

Larry this write is sublime. So many lines complimenting eachother. They are very well discplined as a poem. :)
 — mandolyn

But never heaven as they have run out of room for guys who sin and we all do.

Larry unrepentant Lark
 — larrylark

Hi pasnitro

and in between we are exploited

Larry wor abhat the workers? Lark
 — larrylark

Dear Amy

I am sorry for your loss for death seems so final and there is often so much still to say or do. On a more cheerful note...yes i am still around and my ambition is to fade away just after i have posted my best ever poem on PC.

Larry immortal Lark
 — larrylark

absolutely love the last stanza.
 — jharrison

Cheers jHarrison

Larry happy boy Lark
 — larrylark

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