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psychofemale

my _________ for you
 1
died
 2
 
 
when you left me __________
 3
 
 
I splashed the ___________ onto my face
 4
I thought I was _______________
 5
 
 
but no ________________ could be this ___________
 6
 
 
I sat on the bathroom _________
 7
staring at the ___________
 8
drunk and scared
 9
holding the ____________
 10
 
 
hoping you would __________ back
 11
 
 
but the ____________ let me know we were __________
 12
 
 
this is a typical break up _________
 13
so cliche' so cliche'
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that's why I thought you could fill in the ___________
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:)
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10 Nov 10

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    Very entertaining, I can't critique and hurt peoples feelings... this was very original to this day I think therefore I am has anyone filled in the blanks?
 — gblade

my scorn for you died
when you left me crucified
i splashed blood on my face
i thought i was vilified
but no torture could be this damning
i sat in the bathroom cutting
staring at the skylights
drunk and scared
holding the knife

hoping you would bleed back
but the trepidation let me know we were through
this is a typical break up pact
so cliche' so cliche

that's why I thought you could fill in the emptiness

I hope your heart mends quickly.
 — JKWeb

1. libido
3. hanging
4. cum
5. dumb
6. honey, fun
7. tinkering
8. machine
10. keys
11. kiss
12. cosmos, hoax
13. joke
15. urge
 — unknown

I love these.
Thank you for thinking of us.

cat
nine lives
litter
a feline
feline
furry
sink
faucet
cat toy
scratch
purring
dead
dude
litter box
 — mandolyn

oh great web-- you actually gave a decent version. :-P
 — mandolyn

i'm not good at filling blanks. i only use dum dum bullets.
 — unknown

:)
 — psychofemale

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