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tomcat simile

unlike those fangs in your forearm
embedded when grabbed by the scruff
without writing ideas somewhere
or capturing immediately somehow
thoughts drag ass and are gone
will escape like an embarrassed cat

12 Nov 10

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thoughts will drag ass.
--original. love it.
 — mandolyn

thanks. that was an edit. spent some time with this one. though that particular part was a particularly early (fast) edit/change.
 — hank

the first came later. the title came last.
 — hank

intriguing brief write, I like.
 — JKWeb