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tomcat simile
hank

unlike those fangs in your forearm
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embedded when grabbed by the scruff
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without writing ideas somewhere
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or capturing immediately somehow
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thoughts drag ass and are gone
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will escape like an embarrassed cat
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12 Nov 10

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thoughts will drag ass.
--original. love it.
 — mandolyn

thanks. that was an edit. spent some time with this one. though that particular part was a particularly early (fast) edit/change.
 — hank

the first came later. the title came last.
 — hank

intriguing brief write, I like.
 — JKWeb

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