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Worry
faith

Endless brainwaves of sound
 1
linking two beings
 2
In different rooms, far away
 3
yet close
 4
Wandering about in each others' imagination
 5
Like Bluetooth on an old cellphone
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Needing one another
 7
like abysmal wires need plugs
 8
Conjoin them,
 9
create a spark
 10

20 Nov 10


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music in your page is soothingly nice..techie poem here..are you jap?
'Wandering about in each others imagination' is quite right except you missed apostrophe on 'others' :)
 — unknown

Jap...,you mean Japanese?
No, I'm not. European, here. (:
And thanks about the apostrophe.
 — faith

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