"I remember little about living
behind the latch of that house,
like guess work in an empty sack.
One or two photographs...."
omit House from the title
i think the syntax represents too much emotional distance on the part of the poet from the subject, and as a reader, it's like an extra layer of skin i have to get through to relate. doesn't work for me. maybe for someone else. (nicmichaels) — unknown
Thats how i feel about that early part of my life. I think i was not connected in the right way and still am possibly not. I tried to get even semi attached but unfortunately the house was in a terraced street. — larrylark