the fly has to stop! before landing!!
the sapphire bottle wont break
no matter how hard you throw it
'the blue bottle cannot land with noise'
for G wherever he may be.
19 Dec 10
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this is perdy abstract...
A blue-assed fly short. Leave out the friggin' excamation marks!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and there's and apostrophe in won't as it it's a contraction. Four lines of fly-bottle allusion, hank, won't make this a gem - this is a seed of something a little deeper.
I used to love Bombay Sapphire
but now I fancy Guinness.
Happy Holidays from Canada, Hank
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