| Quickdraw
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psychofemale
| She's quick | 1 |
to draw the gun | 2 |
when he's the target | 3 |
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bullet after bullet | 4 |
flies front ward | 5 |
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shell after shell | 6 |
flies backwards | 7 |
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picturing the practice dummy | 8 |
as him | 9 |
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and lays it on him | 10 |
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first bullet, | 11 |
the heart | 12 |
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for breaking hers | 13 |
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second bullet, | 14 |
the eyes | 15 |
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the many times his wandered | 16 |
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the third, | 17 |
his hands | 18 |
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that never held hers | 19 |
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the forth, | 20 |
his legs | 21 |
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for walking away | 22 |
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the fifth, | 23 |
his back | 24 |
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where he stabbed her | 25 |
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the sixth, | 26 |
his head | 27 |
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to destroy the memories | 28 |
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the seventh, | 29 |
empty | 30 |
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the way she feels | 31 |
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15 Jan 11 |
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bravo!!!! i love firing squads!!! but i guess snipers do best. LOL. i love this a lot ;)
— unknown
thank you :D
— psychofemale
dig the first bullet, btw ;)
— unknown
:) thanks
— psychofemale
i like the title and the storyline/idea
L8 could be "picturing the straw man"
— mandolyn
unfortunately, she didn't realize the gun was loaded with blanks
— unknown
thanks
— psychofemale
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