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A Short Wish List
Mic2

A Short Wish List
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                  “Is pain an outright gift?”
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                                   Reynolds Price
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Who of you, wearing glowing gowns
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of perfect health, would want to leave this earth,
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(in a non-astronaut kind of way)?
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I hope to be completely in pain, worn out
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with a fifteen foot eyedropper of morphine nearby.
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So uncomfortably miserable
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that I want to step through myself,
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or swim right back to the parallel
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of that ruby-ruby red never land.
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It won’t matter if no one remembers
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my pain; how I lie, lips pursed,
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refusing even water, sporadically twitching
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my right thumb, trying to hitchhike
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my skinny ass right on out of town.
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Re-connect with a few old friends,
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all of us sitting at picnic tables,
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making love to each other
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and racks of smoked pork
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while sipping cold beer and sweet tea.
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17 Jan 11


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Comments:

This was kinda morbid...honestly.
 — psychofemale

Hi psychofemale,



yes it kind of is/was. I made a revision to further expound.

I drew some of the details from recently watching and helping a few people pass away peacefully.

Mic2
 — Mic2

I like beer and ribs.
 — unknown

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