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why the qi resides there
hank

when we were little
 1
we coiled copper wire
 2
round a nail
 3
 
 
hooked it up to a battery
 4
and made a magnet
 5
our guts are not different
 6

29 Jan 11

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a nice little morsel. :)
 — mandolyn

hope it helps.
 — hank

yeh i enjoy this one too

i like the use of guts in line 6
 — PollyReg

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